While I have been on holiday Charlotte Charlington has been writing more about her new leading character, Lottie Lincoln.
Lottie nearly fell out of the train. The platform seemed a long way down and she had got flustered trying to work out whether her wheelie weekend case should go before or after her. At least she had arrived at the right station.

The invitation to visit had come from some vague cousin of her late husband; neither of them had many relatives and Callum had never mentioned a cousin Ruth. She had been lurking on the last page of his old address book, so Lottie had added her to the list of people to write and inform of her husband’s sudden death. There was no way of knowing if she was still living at the same address near Peterborough or even if she was still alive, so Lottie was surprised to soon receive a reply and an invitation to visit. Her writer’s mind suspected an ulterior motive, did they assume she was a rich widow? But her author’s mind also thought Ruth’s family could provide excellent inspiration for her writing. She had been relieved to hear the large blended family had no room for her to stay in comfort and had booked the recommended local posh hotel.

Lottie checked her phone again. The latest of several text messages said Si would pick her up at the front of the little station in five minutes. No other passengers were loitering looking out for lifts so presumably he would find her. When she saw a young man jump out of a scruffy white van she wished she had taken a taxi.
‘Hey Lottie, over here.’
Her case twisted sideways as she stepped off the curb. Husbands were so useful for dealing with luggage.
Si quickly appeared at her side.
‘I was coming over to help.’
He picked the case up with ease and slung it into the back of the van, setting a dog barking. Lottie winced. Si led her to the passenger door.
‘I hope you’re more athletic than Gran.’
Lottie hoped he didn’t think she was as old as his grandmother.
‘Step’s a bit high up, just swing yourself in, sorry about the mess.’
He swept crisp packets off the seat and made an attempt to move empty water bottles and drink cans out of the way of her feet. A larger fury head suddenly appeared between the seats. Lottie hastily moved her right arm away from the drooling mouth.
‘That’s Brutus, quite harmless. Hey Brute, you haven’t been furtling around in Lottie’s luggage have you?’
Lottie shuddered.

They swung out of the car park at full speed and hurtled through featureless streets till they pulled up at a straggling building that could be a pub, a hotel or an office block. Si left her to clamber out while he fetched her case and let Brutus out.
‘Okay Brute, you can get back in the front seat now.’
He strode up to the glass doors and Lottie hoped he would leave her at the steps to regain her composure.
‘Never been inside this place before, um reception this way, I’ll leave you at the desk. Oh I nearly forgot, Gran gave me a note for you, just to tell you where we’re all meeting up for dinner. Right, gotta go, see you later.’
A young woman behind the desk smiled then rattled off some questions by rote. ‘Have you stayed with us before? What was your name? Is it just yourself staying? Would you like to book breakfast, any allergies?’
Lottie supposed this was what it would be like, going on holiday by oneself. She didn’t count this as a holiday and hoped she looked like she was away on business. Lottie realised the girl was still talking and handing her a blank rectangle of white plastic.
‘It hasn’t got any writing on it.’
‘For security, just swipe it over the lock, the door is a bit heavy, fire door.. Through the double doors, turn left and you’ll see the lift, room 424.’
The phone on the desk rang and the girl answered before Lottie had a chance to say she didn’t like lifts. She reminded herself she was a successful author who had stayed in hotels for conferences, but Callum had always come along as well.
She pulled her shoulders back and tried to look blasé as other guests sauntered past. In the lift she pressed the button for the fourth floor, held her breath and closed her eyes. Stepping out she was confronted by three doors with room numbers and selected 413-429. She entered a dark corridor, squeezing past a trolley full of sheets and toiletries and cups. 414, 415… the corridor took a sharp turn and became darker and narrower. 419, 420… she was confronted by a set of steps and another corner. How would she ever find her way out again.
Once more she held her breath as she pressed the plastic card against the lock. On the second try there was a flash of green light and with great difficulty she pushed the door open, tripping over the case as she squeezed through, the door was determined to slam shut.
Inside, the décor was the latest in interior trends, grey. Lottie thought longingly of her little cottage, then reprimanded herself. Ladies her age were still out reporting in terrible war zones so she should cope with this weekend. She opened the note, wondering where or when she was actually going to meet Ruth.


You definitely made me feel for Lottie, Janet!
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Thanks Audrey, I expect Lottie has more trials ahead.
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That is a good line about the ladies in war zones! Thye’re amazing!
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Yes indeed Grace, when I think what we pack for a few days and drama if our train is cancelled.
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Been there, Done that, couldn’t find the shop that sold the teeshirts.
I travelled North for the Company I worked for to imput some computer information to help with accounts. I stayed in a beautiful Art Deco hotel near to an old U.S. Airforce base. The hotel was full of strange turnings and little steps. I had to employ the use of a Sherpa to find the dining room the first night. Thereafter I had room service sandwiches to save me getting lost. I was never so glad to see Wales again after my job was done. Huge Hugs Janet.
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Thanks David, there must be many strange hotels hiding round the world, waiting to trap unwary guests. I just spent three nights in an attic on the Isle of Wight…
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DoH Cliff hanger! What happens next? What happens next? Lottie reminds me very much of myself alone on business trips.
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Hello Liz, yes more coming soon in between trips and visitors. I’ll have to see what Charlotte is up to. PS I’m really enjoying ‘Telling Sonny’ and ironically I have been reading in parallel with our four hotels and four train journeys – some disastrous, coming in a blog soon… I am on tenterhooks as I have reached Faby’s seventh month. I love the Vaudeville, similar perhaps to the English Music Hall,; there is a family story of the aunt who referred to ‘Turn out your handbag time’ if she was bored with an act.
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Oh, Janet, thank you for telling me! You’ve made my day.
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I was pleased to see Lottie (and you) back, but when she didn’t like dogs she went right down in my estimation!
Best wishes, Pete.
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Hello Pete, I’m sure Lottie quite likes dogs and is thinking of getting one, but she doesn’t like being taken by surprise, especially in her best clothes!
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Ha, a great story. She managed the train okay which is great. I always find the UK underground intimidating especially in rush hours.
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Yes Robbie, so many people. I miss the underground after 20 years away from London, but rush hour is mad and I don’t miss that part! When I was a child I thought it was so exciting to hear the tube train coming and the light appear round the bend and I still do!
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Yes, that part would be nice if my nerves weren’t shot 🤣
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