Tuesday Tiny Tale -Writing Exercise

Ellie decided to take the towpath back to the farm, relishing the peace and freedom before returning to all her chores at home. Ellie was happy to volunteer to take newly laid eggs and milk to old Widow Brown in her tumbledown cottage. Mother said they had to be nice to her as she had lost both her sons in the war. It had been a busy morning as she had also taken a hearty breakfast to Tommy One Arm in the barn. Her father took pity on any tramps who had been soldiers in the war, especially those maimed or disfigured and unlikely to find work. Father called them all Tommy; there had been One-Eyed Tommy, he was a bit scary till you got used to him. Tommy One Leg had been a joker and popular locally as he could fix anything. Tommy One Arm was very quiet except when he was having a funny turn, which Father said was shell shock. He wore a hat and scarf all the time, only Mother and Father had seen his face properly as Tommy was very good at reading the difficult dusty old books that had been great grandfather’s. He read to their parents after the children were all in bed. Ellie hoped this Tommy would stay. Father never made them move on, but they often got restless and there would come a morning when the barn was empty. Ellie felt sorry for this Tommy, he wouldn’t be able to get married if he had to keep his face covered all the time and he didn’t seem to have any relatives to go and live with.

It was such a lovely morning Ellie skipped along the tow path…

…thinking how good it was to be fourteen and never have to go to school again. She had not thought beyond leaving, though of course her parents had. Going to work as a maid at a big house far away

Okay, no problem, at the Big House nearby or to be a shop girl in town…

…were suggested, but she did not want to leave home and why should she when her big brother stayed on the farm. She had quickly found out that working at home was a lot harder than school. Helping her mother with the endless cooking and looking after the little ones, feeding the pigs and hens and milking the cows. But Father had promised her she could take the pony and trap to market. She loved Lucky the best in the family. He was called Lucky because he had been a colt when the war came and was not taken away to go to France. Ellie and Lucky had grown up together.

As Ellie wandered along picking spring flowers and watching out for the Kingfisher she was startled to hear a man’s voice.

She looked up to see a young man standing on the bow of a colourful narrow boat. A new boat at the old mooring that hadn’t been used for years. Ellie knew all the river folk and he was definitely a stranger, so she was not sure if she should talk to him.

His smile crinkled up to his dark eyes and he had gleaming white teeth. If her father saw that mop of curly black hair he would have him sent off to the barbers or got her mother to get her clippers out, like she did with her brothers. He was taller than her big brother.

Ellie looked around to see what the pretty sight was.

‘Oh yes, this is the prettiest part of the river.’

Ellie looked around to see if a pretty girl had appeared

19 thoughts on “Tuesday Tiny Tale -Writing Exercise

  1. This was entertaining. On the last Tuesday of the month we have what we call “Hot Pen “at our group. I give out a prompt and we all write for 10 minutes and then share what we’ve written. It’s amazing the variety of writing we get from the same prompt. It’s a great exercise and gets the creative juices going.

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    1. Yes I certainly am Carol and wonder if I would ever have got down to writing properly if I hadn’t joined. I haven’t been in an on line group, but it should work if everyone can access and master Zoom or whatever you choose. Our camera club went on line during lockdown and I also joined a Zoom book club while I was having chemo. Of course the traditional answer to anyone searching for any kind of group is ‘Why don’t you start one!’ a daunting task…

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      1. I belonged to one in Phuket which got me started however I have been trying for a while here and nothing plus I haven’t got the time or inclination to start my own the problem is there is literally only me as a European woman here the rest are males and in the main only interested in bars/women there are few who are not and they cook but don’t write therefore I think online and maybe not here is the way to go I’ll have to search and see what I find…Have a great weekend, Janet 🙂

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  2. I was involved for 10 years in a roleplaying game. This is an interactive story, where each writer has one character (or several) who interact with the others’. I enjoyed it very much.
    This exercise of yours reminded me about something similar which I can turn into a novelette (my part only, involving exclusively my characters – and the premise will be changed). Thank you for reminding me that I have somewhere an unfinished story…

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