The Ham Hub writers had decided to have something new to focus on, an exercise for fun, creating a fictional community. Each writer to bring along two or three characters and let them interact with each other. The setting to be remote and rural, between the wars so they would have no mobile phones or ready means of communicating with the outside world.
Charlotte enjoyed the task, a break from writing her novel about Lottie. She tried not to make it anything like Hambourne, though she couldn’t resist adding water. When it was suggested she go first she thought that would be easy, her plot could not clash with anyone else’s if they had not been revealed.

Ellie decided to take the towpath back to the farm, relishing the peace and freedom before returning to all her chores at home. Ellie was happy to volunteer to take newly laid eggs and milk to old Widow Brown in her tumbledown cottage. Mother said they had to be nice to her as she had lost both her sons in the war. It had been a busy morning as she had also taken a hearty breakfast to Tommy One Arm in the barn. Her father took pity on any tramps who had been soldiers in the war, especially those maimed or disfigured and unlikely to find work. Father called them all Tommy; there had been One-Eyed Tommy, he was a bit scary till you got used to him. Tommy One Leg had been a joker and popular locally as he could fix anything. Tommy One Arm was very quiet except when he was having a funny turn, which Father said was shell shock. He wore a hat and scarf all the time, only Mother and Father had seen his face properly as Tommy was very good at reading the difficult dusty old books that had been great grandfather’s. He read to their parents after the children were all in bed. Ellie hoped this Tommy would stay. Father never made them move on, but they often got restless and there would come a morning when the barn was empty. Ellie felt sorry for this Tommy, he wouldn’t be able to get married if he had to keep his face covered all the time and he didn’t seem to have any relatives to go and live with.
It was such a lovely morning Ellie skipped along the tow path…
‘Hang on, is that by the river or a canal?’
I don’t know, that’s why I just put tow path.
…thinking how good it was to be fourteen and never have to go to school again. She had not thought beyond leaving, though of course her parents had. Going to work as a maid at a big house far away
‘Hang on, in mine, it’s The Big House nearby so the characters can be tenant farmers.’
‘and have somewhere to work’ added someone else.
Okay, no problem, at the Big House nearby or to be a shop girl in town…
‘What town, thought they were isolated.’
That’s why she doesn’t want to work in town, too far away.
…were suggested, but she did not want to leave home and why should she when her big brother stayed on the farm. She had quickly found out that working at home was a lot harder than school. Helping her mother with the endless cooking and looking after the little ones, feeding the pigs and hens and milking the cows. But Father had promised her she could take the pony and trap to market. She loved Lucky the best in the family. He was called Lucky because he had been a colt when the war came and was not taken away to go to France. Ellie and Lucky had grown up together.
As Ellie wandered along picking spring flowers and watching out for the Kingfisher she was startled to hear a man’s voice.
‘I thought we were setting it in winter?’
‘No, it was autumn.’
‘It was definitely spring as it is spring now, we’ll be in the right mood’ Charlotte decided to be a bit assertive for a change.
‘Morning Miss.’
She looked up to see a young man standing on the bow of a colourful narrow boat. A new boat at the old mooring that hadn’t been used for years. Ellie knew all the river folk and he was definitely a stranger, so she was not sure if she should talk to him.
‘Thought you didn’t know if it was a river or canal?’
Well spotted, easy to change and we have to hear everyone’s story before we set details.
His smile crinkled up to his dark eyes and he had gleaming white teeth. If her father saw that mop of curly black hair he would have him sent off to the barbers or got her mother to get her clippers out, like she did with her brothers. He was taller than her big brother.
‘Oh I like him, watch out Ellie, my girl will be after him.’
‘This is a pretty sight on a spring morning.’
Ellie looked around to see what the pretty sight was.
‘Oh yes, this is the prettiest part of the river.’
‘That’s why I decided to moor up here yesterday evening and what a surprise to meet a pretty local girl so soon.’
Ellie looked around to see if a pretty girl had appeared
‘May I ask your name? I’m Jack, Jack of all trades.’
‘Hey, I’ve got a Jack.’
‘So have I, head gardener at the big house.’
‘And I’ve got a Tommy, who seduces the scullery maid.’
‘How long since the First World War War then, still got old soldiers wandering? ‘
‘Great War, they didn’t know there was going to be a second one.’
‘1928 I thought we said last week.‘
‘No, it’s going to be in the middle of the Great Depression’
‘When was that then?’

Do you go to a writing group? Do you enjoy doing exercises?

I enjoy attending a monthly Poetry group, where we’re given a prompt and write for 20 minutes, then share. Thank you for posting this. It left me wanting to know more.
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Hello Abbie, I like doing exercises on the spot. Hopefully Charlotte might manage to write more.
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This was entertaining. On the last Tuesday of the month we have what we call “Hot Pen “at our group. I give out a prompt and we all write for 10 minutes and then share what we’ve written. It’s amazing the variety of writing we get from the same prompt. It’s a great exercise and gets the creative juices going.
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Thanks Darlene. I would enjoy your hot pen. I might suggest it for our group, we usually do exercises at the end if we have one.
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Ha ha ha, everybody’s a critic! Yes, I belong to a few writing groups. Only one does exercises; they’re open-ended enough for me to do whatever I want.
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Hello Liz, our group is the only one I’ve stuck with for years, I have tried some groups that turned out to be very strange.
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When it comes to group, very strange isn’t good!
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I’ve only belonged to critique groups, and even those can be problematic. 😁
I can’t imagine writing a group story, but you have done that here, Janet. My sympathies to Charlotte!
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Television and radio serials and dramas are mostly created by teams, I do wonder how they manage that!
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My experience too alas
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Love this you are so lucky to belong to a writing group..I have searched for at least one here and nothing maybe I should try an online one any ideas as to whether that could work?
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Yes I certainly am Carol and wonder if I would ever have got down to writing properly if I hadn’t joined. I haven’t been in an on line group, but it should work if everyone can access and master Zoom or whatever you choose. Our camera club went on line during lockdown and I also joined a Zoom book club while I was having chemo. Of course the traditional answer to anyone searching for any kind of group is ‘Why don’t you start one!’ a daunting task…
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I belonged to one in Phuket which got me started however I have been trying for a while here and nothing plus I haven’t got the time or inclination to start my own the problem is there is literally only me as a European woman here the rest are males and in the main only interested in bars/women there are few who are not and they cook but don’t write therefore I think online and maybe not here is the way to go I’ll have to search and see what I find…Have a great weekend, Janet 🙂
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Yes you are a busy person Carol and hopefully there could be an on line group out in the ether somewhere with members world wide!
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I do hope so, Janet 🙂
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I enjoy your takes on prompts but I have never belonged to a writing group or a study group and I have the bad grades to prove it! Prompts seem too much like homework to me.
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We’ve always called it homework at our writers’ group, but unlike school, you can get away with not doing it!
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I was involved for 10 years in a roleplaying game. This is an interactive story, where each writer has one character (or several) who interact with the others’. I enjoyed it very much.
This exercise of yours reminded me about something similar which I can turn into a novelette (my part only, involving exclusively my characters – and the premise will be changed). Thank you for reminding me that I have somewhere an unfinished story…
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That was certainly a long exercise Marina, that would be fun revisiting your story.
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