At The Seaside Nobody Hears You Scream



How long does it take to write a novel? I am going to go for 2014 as the conception of my new novel ‘At The Seaside Nobody Hears You Scream’. The character of Tobias Elliot Channing, the holder of a degree in psychology and registration as a private investigator, first appeared in a short story ‘The Ambassadors’ in Audio Arcadia’s audio book anthology imaginatively titled Short Stories Volume One. It then appeared in a paperback edition An Eclectic Mix Volume One in 2015, with a wonderfully colourful cover. Toby’s actual birth had come about when our exercise for writers’ group was to create a detective character. The story idea came from Pete at my other writers’ group – write something inspired by the painting The Ambassadors by Hans Holbein the Younger which hangs in the National Gallery.


In February 2014 the Valentine’s Night Storm gave me an idea for the start of A Story, but what the story would be I had no idea. Compared with other natural disasters in the world our storm in Britain was a minor event, but three people were killed. Our house shook during the night even though we are ten minutes walk from the cliff top, further along the coast, at Milford-on-Sea, a Valentine’s romantic dinner turned into a disaster movie; a ‘freak’ wave picked up shingle and smashed it through the panels that make up the front of the art deco building, the diners were eventually rescued by army vehicles.


The weather forecasts warned everyone to stay away from the coast the next morning; so we walked ( okay I dragged Cyberspouse, saying it would be fun to take the scenic route to the local shops ) to the cliff top to see high tide. It was exciting, no chance of being blown off the cliff as you could lean into the south westerly coming off the sea and taking your breath away. But as we clung to the low fence on the cliff top and peered over we got a shock, piles of smashed wood washed over by the waves, rows of beach huts reduced to matchwood. And that is when I had my idea; but you will have to read the novel to find out why Ellen Green was so afraid when she looked over the edge of the cliff that morning.



Fed up with waiting for me to get on with writing the novel, Toby Channing drove his camper van into two very different novellas I was writing, which along with The Ambassadors are part of the collection ‘Someone Somewhere’ published in 2017. ‘Someone For The Weekend’ and ‘Durlswood’ became two of his strangest cases.

What has happened in the intervening two years? Lots of blogging and writing; strangely only five months pass during the novel and the passing of time makes no difference to Tobias Elliot Channing because he is firmly fixed in 2014. It is just as well this novel had a fixed starting point, because writing novels ‘in the present’ is just about impossible. How the world has changed in the past five years…










Visit my Amazon Author pages here to check on all my books.


Open the novel here…

21 thoughts on “At The Seaside Nobody Hears You Scream

  1. Oh no, what every technophobe author dreads to hear… that hasn’t happened to me before, as far as I know… I’ll have to get my sister in Australia to have a go! Try again tomorrow, thanks for wanting to buy it Joy!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. It sure can drag out. I attended my first children’s writing conference earlier this year, and one of the agents said to expect a minimum of two years even after you find a publisher. I think the key is to keep writing all the time because waiting for things to happen in this world seems like a test of one’s patience.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Hello Pete – that’s why I’m an Indie Author! I did start off with my first two novels searching for agents, then when I realised self publishing was possible off I went. I’m not claiming this is the way to success -but it has meant my 93 year old mother gets to read my books in paperback!

      Liked by 1 person

  3. It usually takes me about two years from conception to publication but I’m envious that you can write crime. I’m too lazy to do a lot of research but my readers have been asking for ‘a murder’ story so I may have to try. Perhaps your book will help me? I’ll check it out.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. I’m not sure crime writers would consider me one, policemen and crime just seem to pop up in lots of my writing. I am amused that your writers want murders – I guess crime is popular because people can get outside their comfort zone in the comfort of their own homes. If they were confronted with real bodies…look out for tomorrow’s Friday Flash Fiction!


  5. Sounds interesting, Janet. I remember hearing recently how a holidaymaker asleep in her caravan was blown over the edge of a cliff and died. You don’t expect death to come calling when you’re on holiday. When we cycled along the seafront at Sandown, Isle of Wight, there were notices telling us the cliffs are eroding and not to stand underneath them!

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s